When the completely covered blanketed cloudy sky of winter makes you miss the full moon 😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠
0You have to romanticize each day, no matter how mundane it is, so that life doesn’t feel like its flying by… I like to live by that, but when ur days consist lately of just playing skyrim and that’s literally it, it’s kinda hard to 🥴
0the moment you decide to throw your umbrella on a rainy day, the freedom you feel with every drop that touches your body
1“Seni evinde hissettirecek biri. İmkansız, değil mi Ali?”
Ali, Leyla'ya baktı.
“Benim için o sensin,” der gibiydi bakışları. Sustu. Konuşmadı.
6Hi, Ben! Gonna try and get this typed up before work, but we’ll see. Managed to watch the trailer, and I liked it, at least. I mean, the fact that you made a trailer is impressive enough, regardless of content (you’ve seen my photoshop attempts). And everything seemed to line up well, from what I can tell (and even if it hadn’t I would have just assumed it was my ancient cell phone. XD)
And I don’t know why you don’t think that little snippet is good writing. I feel like one sign of good writing is writing that causes the intended reactions in readers, so as long as that intended reaction was dolphin-like screeching while sitting alone in their car over how ridiculously adorable it was, then you’re golden.
Also, because I apparently can’t stop me from hurting myself; did Claudia know about everything? Because I can’t decide if that makes the pain worse or better. Also curious how Vicki going to join up (at least I think I saw her pop up on the tree?) with the gang. Randomly wondered if Noah still has the scar from the glass table in this universe, since his healing abilities weren’t as developed back then, iirc. Also wondering if any of the extended pack will show up in this story, or if they’ll wait until the sequel.
Part of me wants to try to write little fluffy holiday one shots for the cheer, but part of me is just like …urgh…effort…
I’m sure there were other things, but it’s getting close to clock in time, and I’ve kinda got cotton candy brain today, so. I hope your day is going well so far, and you’re feeling better! And even if you’re iffy on them, other people like the stuff you make! Take care! *Hugs!*
Hey B! I really hope you’re doing okay and that work’s been treating you well. My day went okay as I spend most of it taking it easy, editing and writing.
And I’m very glad you liked the trailer! Makes me very happy ^^.
I guess, it’s mostly because it’s not according to the rules or like literary writing and I find myself comparing my writing constantly and upholding it to impossible standard. Even though I know I shouldn’t and I should just write what I like and frick the rules. Which I’ll try to do more from now on again.
Because you’re right. Good writing is getting feelings out of people and making them happy or sad or even horny with your writing. And for the record, dolphin screeching was probably what I was going for as I wanted people to feel genuine happiness at these little scenes I’m writing now.
I think Claudia suspected who the real sire of Melissa’s baby was. I think she had a feeling or a hunch but she also respected Melissa and her decision to marry Raphael and step out of everything. Bit of a; if you’re not with me at least you’re happy idea. Even though eventually, Raphael ended up hurting Scott and they separated anyway. And Vicky will pop up in this story.
Still haven’t made up my mind if I’ll put everything in this one story or if I should put S3 and it’s storyline (since I’m skipping S2 as that focused on the Kanima mostly) in the sequel. Because what I might do is introduce the new pack members at the end of OUAT before they are bitten and then continue their story and the take over of the school by Jackson and Lydia in the sequel. Because I think that also has merit. And that way I can also set up the Alpha pack and Deuc’s return much more eloquently.
And I have also set up Ben’s storyline with Mack that I definitely want to address further but don’t know if OUAT is still the best place to do that anymore so I might move that to the sequel as well.
Noah does have the scars from the glass table, glass included. There were some scars he kept as he got older. No matter how badly they may hurt on cold days, it’s a reminder to him of what he survived and a reminder of what he never wants to become. So he has that scar. And he kept it.
And because I know your work is probably really, really taxing and I want to share an awful dad joke with you; here’s a snippet of what I wrote for chapter 13 and Jackson showing that he absolutely has the ability to make awful jokes too. (Peter is so proud, and you know Noah and Chris are too, secretly.)
With most of them wide awake the true challenge in front of them was unpiling their puppy pile without anyone becoming fast friends with the ground. A feat which they would have managed to do if it weren’t for Jackson unceremoniously dumping Scott and Stiles off the bed when he couldn’t wake them up to free the others. It was noted that both Scott’s and Stiles’s protests and groans went unacknowledged by Jax and the blond teenager merely smirked at his brother and his friend. And his quip of; “You snooze, you lose.”
Was met with a chorus of groans, a few chuckles by himself, Chris, and Peter, and Stiles’s declaration of; “Oh my god, dude, lame.”
He shot a look at Chris who had taken Ben from Peter and was cradling the sleepy child in his arms. “You sure that one is yours?” He nodded at Jackson.
“Considering how much trouble he was to get out?” Chris sighed, “Yeah that one is mine… at least he’s pretty.”
Jackson looked mildly offended at Chris’s words. “Okay one, I had a three point five GPA at my last school and two,” He gestured to his own face, “I am very pretty and very proud of that.”
1thinking about how before that snow fight scene waiter boy dropped off greg like that is literally the same car and greg said ‘great night’ so he spent the night before the tomshiv wedding at waiter boy’s house……. your honor this man is a whore
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